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Shardstar ~ Riverclan Leader

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Shardstar ~ Riverclan Leader

Post by Kitty on 20/09/13, 07:51 pm

 
~ Shardstar ~
 
~ Theme Song ~
 

             
~ Name ~

Shardstar

~ Gender ~

Female

~ Age ~
                                
23 moons

~ Clan ~
                       
Riverclan

~ Rank ~

Leader

~ Appearance ~

Shardstar is a very beautiful cat. She has a little bit less than long length fur.
Shardstar has long legs great for swimming and a very muscular body and long claws for fighting. She has a bright grey fur and dark grey stripes from her ears
   to her tail tip. Shardstar has crystal blue and a turquoise-green eyes.
   She has one scar along her front leg, from her paw to her shoulder.
Shardstar's tail is a mix of black, grey, and white. Her front leg is all white
and she has white on her cheast and muzzle.

~Personality~
Shardstar is more of a rough tom-boyish type. She is very unmerciful
and demanding. Shardstar has a sweet side though. She is very kind and
expects every cat to give respect to every cat, even kits. Shardstar
is most-likely to forgive and most-likely to punish if your in trouble.
She is very protective of her Clan and always has back-up plan for
anything possible from food scarcity to ambush attacks.
Shardstar is very clever and thoughtful and thinks of different hunting,
training, and fighting techniques.

~ Crush/Mate/Kits ~
     
None yet

~ History ~

Shardstar used to live with an abusive twoleg. She snuck out
to Riverclan and slowly gained there trust and soon became
deputy and soon after that the Leader died and she became
leader.

~ Family ~
                           
You can make her family post on this thread if you want to.  


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Re: Shardstar ~ Riverclan Leader

Post by *Smoke* on 20/09/13, 08:28 pm

Great looking Kit! Has a few grammar errors, and I went ahead and fixed the centering for you- it seemed like what you were trying to do. If you want me to change it back just tell me.
Her appearance could use a sentence or two more, but otherwise it's accepted :)

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Post by Kitty on 20/09/13, 08:32 pm

Thanks, that's always what I have trouble with on bios, spelling and centering and stuff. I wasn't in my thinking mode then I will add to it.

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Post by *Smoke* on 20/09/13, 08:33 pm

Okiedokie, sounds like a plan :3

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Post by *Smoke* on 21/09/13, 11:59 pm

Looks great Kit! :D

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