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Brokenpaw - ShadowClan Medicine Cat Apprentice

Post by -»༺cяyρтCяyѕтαlѕ༻«- on 23/02/16, 11:47 pm

Name
 Brokenpaw (Brokentooth in the future)


Nickname
 Bro Tooth, when he gets his new name.


Gender
Male


Clan & Rank
 ShadowClan medicine apprentice.


Appearance
 Brokenpaw is quite short in stature, with short legs, and overall the tom is slim and agile rather than muscular. His fur is a light gray, with fluffy white stomach and chest fur, and a deep pink nose. He has a short, thick-furred tail and long silver whiskers.
His left tooth is much longer than the other, usually poking out of his mouth and making a few words a bit difficult to say. The fang is chipped from an incident where he tripped over his paws and fell onto a rock, which broke a piece of his tooth off.
His eyes are large and a deep copper-brown, usually shining with curiosity.
He has a few small scars littered onto his legs and paws, from multiple clumsy accidents.

Personality
Usually lively and energetic, he's very curious and always seems to be wanting to learn more about the world around him. A very cheerful tom with an optimistic look on life, he seems to always persevere through tough situations. He can however lack patience and be a bit stubborn when it comes to what he deems as unfair, which may get him into troublesome situations at times.
He's very clumsy, usually tripping over his own paws, and can be startled easily. He likes things to be organized and neat, and often feels anxious if they're not.


Likes/Dislikes
+Rain and storms
+Neat surroundings
+Talkative cats, he enjoys listening
+Dark places
-Anything to do with twolegs, he has a strong phobia of them, more so than most
-Light, his eyes are sensitive to brightness
-Mess



Disabilities 
Minor OCD, and a problem with his eyes where too much light will cause sharp pain and blurred vision for a few minutes, when most cats can handle it with just a bit of squinting.


History
 His mother was a loner who brought him to ShadowClan and begged them to take care of him, and left shortly after. His father is unknown, but is presumed to be a loner or perhaps a kittypet. After that, he was raised by the clan. After a few moons, he took interest in herbs, and enjoyed watching Mochaberry go through the medicine cat duties.
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Post by Thistlestar on 24/02/16, 10:54 am

Wonderful application.
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Re: Brokenpaw - ShadowClan Medicine Cat Apprentice

Post by -»༺cяyρтCяyѕтαlѕ༻«- on 24/02/16, 12:10 pm

Thanks! Tried to make it fancy.
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Re: Brokenpaw - ShadowClan Medicine Cat Apprentice

Post by *Smoke* on 24/02/16, 05:32 pm

Bro LMAO I laughed my butt off at that XD
Accepted as medicine cat apprentice of ShadowClan!

Two things, however;
1. there's a plot going on with Mochaberry that will be really important with Brokenpaw.
2. Brokentooth sounds like an elder name XD

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Post by -»༺cяyρтCяyѕтαlѕ༻«- on 24/02/16, 06:58 pm

Ooh, mystery! I love important plots, especially if they include meddies. ovo
Oh yeah it kinda does, huh? Do I need to change it or is it just a funny name for a young cat?
He'll at least have a fitting name for when he joins the elders, XD
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Post by *Smoke* on 24/02/16, 07:04 pm

Yeah, Mochaberry falls in love with Eaglepaw/Eaglesky and they have kits. She's going to be forced to train another apprentice before and after she has the kits until the apprentice is read to take her place, then she has to step down as med cat.

It's just a funny name. It's up to you to change it :3

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Post by -»༺cяyρтCяyѕтαlѕ༻«- on 24/02/16, 07:06 pm

I'll keep it, funny names are after all, funny.
Plus this is the only name I could find to fit him. Darn cat was way more difficult to make than he looked.
All I knew when I had the idea was "med app + tooth + clumsy + friendly + tom + named that ends with -tooth = character" XDD it took forever to decide on his appearance and name even if it sucks XP
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Post by *Smoke* on 24/02/16, 07:08 pm

Lol, it's not bad! It's quirky :3

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Post by -»༺cяyρтCяyѕтαlѕ༻«- on 29/02/16, 06:15 am

Thanks!
Btw sorry for the many questions but where do I post now? XD
I haven't had a meddie in a long time on either of my forums, and I'm not sure where to post.
Does he come with on the appointing of Feralstar, or not?
Does he have to have the "You are now a meddie app" ceremony or is that skipped and that happened earlier?
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Post by *Smoke* on 29/02/16, 04:37 pm

Well, Mochaberry is currently Mochapaw in Feralstar's leadership ceremony post, so I don't think that would be logical XD
However, that is an example of how terrible time lines can get. At the end, you can control some unknown StarClan warrior and tell Mochaberry that her apprentice will be Brokenpaw right after she receives her name :3
Feralclaw isn't too active rn on that, so you don't have to if you don't want to.


But here is what I suggest we do....
We make a thread where Mochaberry is the full medicine cat and she is taking on Brokenpaw as her apprentice. Yeah? :3


Most importantly...
Sorry! Forgot to post this:
http://thenewera.fullforums.org/t1273-a-guide-to-being-a-medicine-cat-apprentice
That should help you out some :)

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Post by -»༺cяyρтCяyѕтαlѕ༻«- on 01/03/16, 12:16 am

Awesome, thank you!
And yeah, time lines can get a bit messy.
That sounds perfect though, awesome. I'll try to remind Cody (feralclaw) that he should post more on the thread if you want :P
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Post by *Smoke* on 01/03/16, 02:18 pm

Lol no its fine. I can start the thread later today

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